From Caitlyn's latest IEW writing assignment. My comments in purple.
While [the second Mr. Jenkins] was announcing this, he suddenly became a huge bird of nothing (oh), which disappeared into the sky. Shocked (I would think so), the first Mr. Jenkins - the real one - slowly emerged from the school building (A bad move, in my opinion). As he took his place as principal, he strongly hoped that tomorrow would be a more quotidian day. I would be hoping for a more quotidian day, too!
Lol, definitely interesting :)
based on A Wind in the Door by Madeleine L'Engle
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